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Re: Determined to Learn English Writting...
I like that you're here to learn English, it's an interesting way of doing so. I learned to speak English mostly thanks to television. I gotta say though this could ...
Nov 6, 2007 -
Re: Picture the Civil War
Whoa, that was really awesome what you did there with the POV. Very creative and something i haven't seen yet. I loved how you wrote the descriptions and it was ...
Nov 6, 2007 -
Re: Eighteen Hundred Seconds ~ Part I of III
I like it, i have barely any idea what is going on, but i like it. First day in the arena, and ever since I woke up I had been ...
Nov 4, 2007 -
Re: Victory
Victory Chapter 5: Seeing Double 3/21 Robert rushed in between the crowds of people, Commander Garnet and Lt. Hound following behind. “Commander Simmons!” they shouted as they chased him, but ...
Nov 4, 2007 -
Re: Victory
Victory Chapter 3: Accusations 3/21 “What’s happening here? I can sure you sir that Commander Simmons committed no crime, as you can see we just arrived here.” “The murder was ...
Nov 4, 2007 -
Re: Victory
Victory Chapter 2: The Ring 3/21 Robert felt himself being pulled up. His stomach became queasy, but it was nothing compared to the ride he received to get up here. ...
Nov 4, 2007 -
Re: Victory
Victory Chapter 1: To Space 3/21 The shuttle landed on the emerald-green lawn, the sun gleaming off its gray hull. Colonel Robert Greenwald sat on a small red bench a ...
Nov 4, 2007 -
Re: What up?
Hello there! I'm Unregistered User and i am new to this site. It's nice to meet you all and i hope to have a good time here. I like writing, ...
Nov 4, 2007
